2009年7月8日水曜日

Portfolio for Writing III


Three Billy-GoatsStudent ID: 08151

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1C


(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.1. Showcase

Short titles with links to blog posts

Dates
yyyy.mm.dd

W

C

L

P

M

1-01b (2009.04.20)

letter to family

2009.06.01

5

247

5

0

0

0

(1-01c)

Dear My Host Family


2009.07.15


4


259


0

0

0

0

1-02a (2009.06.01)

University Life

2009.04.08

4

416

3

0

0

0

1-02b (2009.07.06)

University Life


2009.07.15


6


526


0

0

0

0

(1-02c)









1-03a (2009.06.29)

Aloha

2009.06.29

6

455

2

0

0

0

1-03b (2009.07.13)

Aloooooooooooha☆


2009.07.15


6


455


0

0

0

0

Totals

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31

2358

10

0

0

0

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).



Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: I think I could write I want to introduce about my university all things. →University Life



2.0. Comments

Showcase

Titles of posts with links

Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd

Numbers of words in comments

Qualities of comments**

2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*

letter to family"

2009.04.08

36 words

Hi! Rie I have been to Australia...

2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*

University life

2009.06.25

20 words

I like talk to friends and watching ...

2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*

University Life

2009.06.01

59words

I sympathized the first sentence that...

2.4. Most comments on:

Titles of posts with link

Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd

Total number of words in comments

Qualities of comments**

2.4.1. Any one of your essays*

Half Blood Prince

2009.07.17

27 words

You seemed happy and excited to watch...

2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?

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2009.07.18

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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?

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16 words

I really enjoyed Harry Potter...

2.4.2. Any of your other posts*

Kapibara

2009.07.09

14 words

I guess your friend...

2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?

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2009.07.18

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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?

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22 words

My friend looked happy...






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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

  • Header, because I think it is stand out.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • I could read comments soon.

  • I could exchange with visitor.



3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase

Short titles
with links

Dates: yyyy.mm.dd

Words

Comments

Example:

Vampire Killer

2007.05.16

39

1

BR 1-01

Billy-Goats

2009.04.18

75

0

BR 1-02

ugly dackling

2009.04.19

73

0

BR 1-03

Ponocchio

2009.04.29

106

1

BR 1-04

Shoemaker and the Elves

2009.05.01 178

0

BR 1-05

Vampire Killer

2009.05.04

192

0

BR 1-06

Fairytale

2009.05.06

270

0

BR 1-07

The Clumsy

2009.05.18

75

1

BR 1-08

The Frog prince

2009.05.25 129

0

BR 1-09

Narnia

2009.06.06 204

0

BR 1-10

Dianna

2009.06.15 1110

BR 1-11

Queen of France

2009.06.26

146

0

BR 1-12

Frog

2009.07.06

148

0









































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Totals:




Note
: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • BR 1-09: Narnia
    I could write this review soon, because this is one of favorite movie. I enjoying write review.

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase

Yes

No

4.1. Does your blog display an archive?


4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?



4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?



4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?



4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?



5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):

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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)



  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")

O


  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)

O


  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)



  • "movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)

O


  • "brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")

O


4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?



  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?

    • 0 other labels attached to three or more posts

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4.3. Links & media

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4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?



  • Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?



  • How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?

    • 37 posts including photos or other graphics

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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?



  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?

    • 0 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)

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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?



  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?

    • 0posts including other media

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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here:

    1. ...

    2. ...

    3. ...


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  • What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference.

    1. ... (short link, date)

    2. ... (short link, date)

    3. ... (short link, date)


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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

  1. I paste many picture.
  2. I used Pink and Blue.
  3. I wrote simple.

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

  • I felt interesting. I’m going to write more at next semester.

  • Typing speed is faster. I didn’t like computer, but now I like using computer.

  • I always took a picture with my friend to paste blog, it was interesting



6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

  • You had better take a many picture. For example your friends, favorite thing, food and so on.

  • Write a blog and read book when you have free time.

  • I think need typing skill, so you had better practice. And need basic computer knowledge and USB memory.


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Notes:

  1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).

  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.

  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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1 件のコメント:

yutaro さんのコメント...

thank you for your advice!
http://yutaro-blog.blogspot.com/2009/09/suggetion.html