2009年6月29日月曜日

Essay 1-03a: Aloha

I like this movie. I watched this movie with my friend when I junior high school student. Stitch is so cute, but my friend doesn’t like Stitch. I can believe it! I really like Stitch, so I will write about movie “ Lilo and Stitch” form now.

First, I write about Lilo. Lilo is heroin this movie. She is five years old. She has only older sister. She has no parents. Her sister works every day, so Lilo always alone. She has no friends. She likes Hawaiian dance and Elvis Presley. She often listens to his music. She wanted to friends.

Second, I write about Lilo’s sister. Her name is Nani. She works instead of their parents, because their parents are killed in a car accident, so she works every day. She sometimes punched her younger sister, so social worker came to her house. One day she hard to her sister wanted to friend, so she decided to have dog. And they went to health center to get dog, and Lilo choose dog. It is Stitch!!!

Stitch was made by Dr Jumba. He is alien. Stitch is cleverer than computer and he is powerful, so he can carry truck easily. He can’t swim, but he likes surfing. He is good maker. He can make everything; he can cooks very big cake, Los Angels and so on. He has no family. He escaped from space, and he car accident. He is unconscious. After that, he met Lilo.

They are this movie’s main character. I really like this movie. I watched many times. This movie is fun and impressive. When stitch looking for his family, I cried. Maybe you think poor stitch. He exiled from space, so he arrived at Hawaii, and met Lilo. But, Jumba and agent Pleakly was came to Hawaii. Their purpose was take back Stitch. They tried catch to Stitch, but they couldn’t. And Cobra Bubbles is social worker, and he tried to custody of Lilo, because her sister Nani, she always works, so Lilo always stays up home alone. Lilo feels sad, and she wanted to make friend.

So Nani and Lilo go to health center to get a dog, and Lilo chose Stitch. Stitch is very bad, so Lilo tried to good to Stitch. First, she teaches how to hula dance, how to play the guitar and so on, and Nani look for work. But her house was fire in the boiler, because Jumba tried to catch the Stitch and Lilo and Nani’s house explosion, so Lilo said “Go away!!” Stitch felt sad…then, another alien tried to catch Stitch, but this alien wrong and catch Lilo. So Stitch fought to help her. It was very interesting. My cousin likes this scene. Last, Stitch could help her, and he said to Jumba and another alien “This is my family. I found by myself.” My family is as good as Stitch’s family. This movie is not only interesting but also impressive.

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cono さんのコメント...

Your essay is wonderful!
You can use space key and paragraph was divided well. I like this story.