Revisions essay post: 2-02b

I introduce about my chose sites. I chose Christmas bear, Fireworks party, Halloween sites. Fired works party, Halloween, and Christmas bear’s sites are very colorful, so I thought children like it. These sites are device to fascinate for children. I interested in it.

Especially, Christmas bear site gives children great pleasure. I saw a long time. It is teach me about five senses. I could enjoy as learn about five senses. If you want to learn it, you need to click bear, boy, candy, and so on. It was interesting. I had to thinking. I thought American Christmas is lively. You can know about not only five senses but also American Christmas, and different from American to Japanese Christmas.

Second, I watched fireworks party, but I couldn’t understand well. It site is very colorful. Children will like it, because it site’s fireworks very beautiful sparkle. I though it site made for younger children and beginner study English, but it site was incomprehensible for me, so if beginners English students won’t understand well.


Third I watched Halloween. At Japan, people don’t wear costume at Halloween. It is different from American. When children see it site at night or midnight, they may be can’t sleep or saw nightmare. It site speak English slowly, so I can study listening and speaking English. It site improves non speak English children.


To know about different country’s seasonal events are interesting. It sites are entertain with me, so probably someone can enjoy these sites too. Beginner can know about seasonal events, five senses, and enjoying study English.

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Quickpost

Halloween http://www.studyzone.org/testprep/ela4/i/impatica/hauntedhouse.html

Fierworks Party
http://www.bbc.co.uk/cbeebies/razzledazzle/rhymetime/firework/index.shtml

Christmas bear http://www.beaconlearningcenter.com/WebLessons/ChristmasBear/default.htm

My first impression; these site are very colorful and pretty. I thought children are like these site. These stories are device to children interested in these sites. Character is move when I click characters. It is fun isn’t it? Children must be wild and see these sites. I wild and see too. These site devices to children absorb in seeing it.

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Because...

 Bathroom
➢ Mend
 Bed
➢ Mend
➢ Conform
 Section meeting room
➢ Met circle friend
➢ We talk to a long time
 My room
➢ Relax
➢ Convenient
➢ Conform
 Nature
➢ Mend
➢ Relax
 Tennis court
➢ Like playing tennis
➢ Exciting
➢ Relieve my stress
➢ Healthy
 Gym
➢ Like playing basketball
➢ Relieve my stress
➢ Exciting
➢ Healthy
 Movie Theater
➢ Like watching movie
➢ Has big screen
➢ Exciting
 Bookstore
➢ Relax
➢ Like reading book, magazine, novel
 Rental video shop
➢ Like watching movie, and drama
➢ Conform
 Korea
➢ Like studying Korean
➢ Delicious food
➢ Cute shops
➢ Interesting place
 CLAIR
➢ Many clothes shops
➢ Good restaurant
➢ Cute good shops

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My favorite Place

Bathroom
Bed
Section meeting room
My room
Nature
Tennis court
Gym
Movie Theater
Bookstore
Rental video shop
Korea
CLAIR


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Ohana and Friendship(Lilo and Stitch)

Ohana from movie

• Lilo has older sister, and their family died.
• Stitch has no family.
• Evil scientist made him.
• Stitch search for his family
• Stitch found his family!!
• His family is Lilo and Nani

Ohana in real life

• My family is as good as Stitch’s family.
• I sometimes fight with my brother like a Lilo and Nani.
• Maybe we are good family.

Friendship from movie

• Lilo’s friends are spiteful.
• Stitch is good friend for Lilo.
• Nani and her boyfriend is good friend for Lilo too.
• At last, Stitch and Lilo is making a lot of friends!!

Friendship from real life

• I like my friend very much.
• They are very funny.
• We sometimes fight, but we reconcile soon.
• I often talk with my friends.

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Lilo and Stitch

Stitch is cleverer than computer
He is very strong man
He is alone
But he found his family
He is cute
He is soft
His body is blue
He has big eyes
He can speak
His hearing is amazing

This themes are family friendship.

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Activites I don't do in university

Driving to school.
Studying mathematic.
Eating mushroom and fish.

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