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2009年11月11日水曜日

Revisions essay post: 2-02b

I introduce about my chose sites. I chose Christmas bear, Fireworks party, Halloween sites. Fired works party, Halloween, and Christmas bear’s sites are very colorful, so I thought children like it. These sites are device to fascinate for children. I interested in it.

Especially, Christmas bear site gives children great pleasure. I saw a long time. It is teach me about five senses. I could enjoy as learn about five senses. If you want to learn it, you need to click bear, boy, candy, and so on. It was interesting. I had to thinking. I thought American Christmas is lively. You can know about not only five senses but also American Christmas, and different from American to Japanese Christmas.

Second, I watched fireworks party, but I couldn’t understand well. It site is very colorful. Children will like it, because it site’s fireworks very beautiful sparkle. I though it site made for younger children and beginner study English, but it site was incomprehensible for me, so if beginners English students won’t understand well.


Third I watched Halloween. At Japan, people don’t wear costume at Halloween. It is different from American. When children see it site at night or midnight, they may be can’t sleep or saw nightmare. It site speak English slowly, so I can study listening and speaking English. It site improves non speak English children.


To know about different country’s seasonal events are interesting. It sites are entertain with me, so probably someone can enjoy these sites too. Beginner can know about seasonal events, five senses, and enjoying study English.

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2009年10月28日水曜日

Draft essays post: 2-02a

I introduce about my chose sites. My chose sites are introduce about fire works party, Halloween, and Christmas bear. I like seasonal event, because these event makes me entertain, so I chose these sites.


These sites are very colorful, so I thought children like it. These sites are device to fascinate for children. I interested in it. Especially, Christmas bear site. I saw a long time. It is teach me about five senses. I could enjoy as learn about five senses. If you want to learn it, you need to click bear, boy, candy, and so on. It was interesting. I had to thinking. I thought American Christmas is lively. Of course Japanese Christmas is lively too, but American Christmas is people have dinner with their family, and almost people has big Christmas tree. Presents are under the tree. It is different from Japanese Christmas. I want to eat pie, get present under the big tree and so on, but my wish is difficult. Japanese house’s ceiling is low, and door is narrow, so I can’t carry big tree into my house. I want to eat the candy that’s colors are red and white. It is really cute. I want to try eating. My friend wants to eat too. I don’t know where am I go?


Second, I watched fireworks party, but I couldn’t understand well. It site is very colorful. You can watch beautiful fireworks. It sparkle is really beautiful, also real fireworks very beautiful better than picture, but I’m poor at very big sound. I didn’t watch fireworks this year, but after the school festival, I could watch fireworks with my circle member. It was very big sound. I stopped my ears. It was very beautiful.


Third I watched Halloween. At Japan, people don’t wear costume at Halloween, but I want to wear costume!! American people (almost children) wear costume at Halloween, and they get a lot of sweets. When they get sweets, they shouted “Trick or treat!!” I want to do it. Certainly, it is funny. What kind of costume do you want to wear? I want to wear witch or vampire I can wear costume at circle’s dance party. I wore cat costume this Halloween party, but it wasn’t interesting, but I will wear witch or vampire’s costume next year.

To know seasonal events are interesting. I want to search more different from American to Japan, and I want to search about another country’s seasonal events too.


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