Student ID: 08151
Portfolio for Writing IV, Section 1C
(See: Note 1, below)
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. OVERVIEW
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)1.0. ESSAYS
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates yyyy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| 2-01a (2009.10.07) | My favorite place | 2009.10.12 | 3 | 310 | 13 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| 2-01b (2009.10.21) | My favorite place 2 | 2009.10.21 | 8 | 380 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| (2-01c) | ||||||||
| 2-02a (2009.11.04) | ||||||||
| 2-02b (2009.11.18) | Revisions essay post: 2-02b | 2009.11.11 | 5 | 261 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| (2-02c) | ||||||||
| 2-03a (2009.12.02) | Personal Language Learning | 2009.12.01 | 7 | 636 | 5 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| 2-03b (2009.12.18/22) | Language | 2009.12.21 | 7 | 517 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| (2-03c) | ||||||||
| Totals | --- | --- | 30 | 2104 | 18 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Most Improved Essay
(See: Note 4, below.)Selection and Assessment: Which of the three essays that you've written and revised this semester shows the most improvement? What did you do to improve it? Remember that complete answers are better than short answers, focus on your writing (accuracy, appropriacy, content and organization, rather than graphics or other media), and explain at least two major improvements
Language
- I wrote from trigger to dream. I wrote my opinion and think frankly. It essay is long, but divide to paragraph, and use easy words, so visitor read easily.
2.0. COMMENTS
Showcase | Short titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | Social media | 2009.10.14 | 23 | impression |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | "Essay2-03(a): Language Learning Stories" | 2009.12.09 | 29 | Question and impression |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Korea | 2009.08.25 | 23 | Impression |
2.4. Most comments on: | Short titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Language | 2009.12.01 | 636 | Question and sympathy |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009.12.09 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 93 | On the blog |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | Korea | 2009.08.25 | 310 | impression |
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009.09.10 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 60 | On the blog |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes comments good.
2.5. Recent comments display
- I display recent comments fr0m blog visitors in top of sidebar. I can comments easily, and when visitors wrote comments, my blog send mail for my sell phone.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- This is first time!!!
I often visit your blog!!!Have a good your holiday !!!
- How's going New Year Days?
What "tane" is your favorite for "Oden"?
I like "atsuage" is the best.
3.0. BOOK REVIEWS
3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 2-01 | 2009.10.05 | 158 | 0 | |
BR 2-02 | 2009.10.07 | 58 | 0 | |
BR 2-03 | 2009.10.08 | 113 | 0 | |
BR 2-04 | 2009.10.12 | 112 | 0 | |
BR 2-05 | 2009.10.15 | 145 | 0 | |
BR 2-06 | 2009.10.21 | 221 | 0 | |
BR 2-07 | 2009.10.28 | 214 | 0 | |
BR 2-08 | 2009.11.06 | 178 | 0 | |
BR 2-09 | 2009.11.09 | 122 | 0 | |
BR 2-10 | 2009.11.10 | 142 | 0 | |
BR 2-11 | 2009.11.11 | 115 | 0 | |
BR 2-12 | 2009.11.13 | 50 | 0 | |
BR 2-13 | 2009.11.15 | 113 | 0 | |
BR 2-14 | 2009.11.16 | 107 | 0 | |
BR 2-15 | 2009.11.16 | 156 | 0 | |
BR 2-16 | 2009.11.23 | 124 | 0 | |
BR 2-17 | 2009.11.23 | 104 | 0 | |
BR 2-18 | 2009.11.24 | 104 | 0 | |
--- | --- | Totals: | 2232 | 0 |
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.Romeo and Juliet
- It book became my favorite work. I wrote about "Romeo and Juliet" intently, so visitor maybe has interest.
4.0. BLOG LAYOUT, LABELING, LINKING, and MEDIA
Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | ○ | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 4.2. Does your blog display a cloud or list of labels in the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
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| 4.3. Links and media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Do your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? | ○ | |
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
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| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
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Fireworks Party http://www.bbc.co.uk/cbeebies/razzledazzle/rhymetime/firework/index.shtml Christmas bear http://www.beaconlearningcenter.com/WebLessons/ChristmasBear/default.htm | --- | --- |
4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation and readability of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.- I posted many photos. When I played, I looked for interesting thing to post.
- Sometimes I wrote complain. Number of friend read enjoying.
5.0. ADDITIONAL REFLECTIONS ON YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WRITING FOR IT
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, selections, and reflections).- I wrote more 13o94 words. It was hard for me. This year, I was really busy, but I had many homework. I reflected that I couldn't post essay on time, and wrote more 1500 words. I had to post at summer vacation. I almost didn't post at August.
6.0. ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS FOR YOURSELF, YOUR PEERS, AND YOUR SUCCESSORS
- Have a free time, you has better post.
- Look for interesting thing and you can post many photos and wrote.
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from Writing Studio Blog templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc (2007-08), Writing III, §§1a & 1c, Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c (2008-09), and the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III.
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
- The essay selection and explanation item (§1.2, above) differs from that in the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III. Please read the new item carefully before making a selection.
License:
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Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog, 2010.01.05" (with link, but without quotation marks).
Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog, 2010.01.05" (with link, but without quotation marks).
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