I like KGU. Many students may be proud of own department. KGU is very interesting university, so I’m going to write about university life.
First, I’ m going to write about our homework. We always have to do a lot of homework. We must write blog, read book (this book written by English) everyday, other class’s homework. Now I have speaking homework, and I have to read book, writing blog, and Korean. My friend has more homework than me. She looks tired, but cannot help studying, because we have very nice dream. But I’m poor at speaking test. We have to discussion during three people. I’m tension when I have speaking test.
Second, I’ll write about our university. KGU has a lot of unique and funny student. I think KGU is cheerful university. My friends said me “I think your university is very fun. I wanted to go to your university.” I feel happy. I like KGU very much. KGU is always busy. I think this university students are easygoing. Anyway, there is much kind of students.
Next, I’ll write about class. If you have class from first period, you have to come to school before nine o’clock! And we study from nine to ten thirty minute. Friend and I is feel sleep. We are the department of English student, so we have English class. Of course we have reading, writing, speaking, listening class. This classes taught by English teachers. Friend and I sometimes can’t understand what my teacher says, so we sometimes feel down. I usually ask my friends about homework. My friend can understand. I admire her.
I’m going to introduce about circle and events. Most students belong to circle. I belong to Aokatsu. Every students like own circle. Every circle is very nice. Circle has many events, for example: Athletic festival School festival dances party. Every event is very funny. But if you want to go all events, you have to pay a lot of money. Every student will pay a lot of money, but every event really nice and interesting. I can’t choose the most interesting event.
Finally, I’m going to introduce about good place in KGU. KGU has nice bakery and cafeteria. Bakery and cafeteria has very good meal. I like pizza, Pizza sold out soon. I can’t get it. Almost student eat lunch at the bakery and cafeteria, but KGU has many student, so we can’t eat at bakery and cafeteria. We go to class room, but we can’t eat lunch in the PC room. If you spill drink, PC will break. KGU has wonderful library. We can use computer, read many kind of book. For example KGU University has Korean, Chinese, English, and novel, picture book. And we can watch Japanese, Korean, Chinese, English movie and drama. I really like library. We use library when I have no class and teat term. Library will good place you want to study. If you want to read news paper written by English or Korean or Chinese, you can read it. This library is very nice. When test term, we go to cafeteria, bakery, library. I think KGU has really nice place.
(526 words)
2009年7月15日水曜日
Essay 1-01b: Dear My Host Family
Hello!
My name is Manami N. I’m nineteen years old. I have four people in my family. I have parents, my younger brother, and me. We live in Kumamoto. Kumamoto’s people can eat “Basashi.” Basashi is horse’s meat! It is delicious. My hobby is watching movies and reading. My favorite movie is “High school musical.” Do you know it? This movie is very interesting.
My favorite books are “Harry Potter”, “Princess diaries” and “Twilight.” Those books are interesting too, so I want to go to America when I was junior high school student. I’m looking forward to go to America, but I’m shy, so I’m worry a little bit, but I' usually talkative. I like talking with my friend.
I can speak English a little bit, so I study English hard. I don’t like a lot of food, fish, mushroom and so on. My favorite food is pizza. My favorite drink is cocacola. I like both very much. My favorite actor and actress are Zac efron, Vanessa hadgens, Miley Cyrus. I have DVDs “High school musical” and “Hannnah Montana”, so I’m really looking forward to go to America. Do you know them?
They are nice singer. My friend bought Miley’s CD “break out.” This song is cool. I like them, but now I like “Twilight.” Do you know it? This book is awesome. This book is very interesting!! I read every day. I want to go to watching movie “Twilight,” but I have no time to go to watching movie. I want to go to theater soon.
See you.
(259 words)
My name is Manami N. I’m nineteen years old. I have four people in my family. I have parents, my younger brother, and me. We live in Kumamoto. Kumamoto’s people can eat “Basashi.” Basashi is horse’s meat! It is delicious. My hobby is watching movies and reading. My favorite movie is “High school musical.” Do you know it? This movie is very interesting.
My favorite books are “Harry Potter”, “Princess diaries” and “Twilight.” Those books are interesting too, so I want to go to America when I was junior high school student. I’m looking forward to go to America, but I’m shy, so I’m worry a little bit, but I' usually talkative. I like talking with my friend.
I can speak English a little bit, so I study English hard. I don’t like a lot of food, fish, mushroom and so on. My favorite food is pizza. My favorite drink is cocacola. I like both very much. My favorite actor and actress are Zac efron, Vanessa hadgens, Miley Cyrus. I have DVDs “High school musical” and “Hannnah Montana”, so I’m really looking forward to go to America. Do you know them?
They are nice singer. My friend bought Miley’s CD “break out.” This song is cool. I like them, but now I like “Twilight.” Do you know it? This book is awesome. This book is very interesting!! I read every day. I want to go to watching movie “Twilight,” but I have no time to go to watching movie. I want to go to theater soon.
See you.
(259 words)
Half Blood Prince
Today, I watched “Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince.” It is volume 6. When I finished second period class, I went to Movie Theater soon!! I was very looking forward to watch this movie since two month, so I’m really exciting. It was very good. I want to watch twice or three times. Last sense was very sad. I cried.
I thought Harry Potter isn’t popular in Kumamoto, but I was wrong. Many people came to theater to watch Harry Potter. I’m surprised. I watched caption version. There were high school students, old woman and so on. Harry Potter is loved by many generations. I really like Harry Potter. You have to watch this movie♪♪
(118 words)
Essay 1-03b: Aloooooooooooha☆
I like this movie. I watched this movie with my friend when I junior high school student. Stitch is so cute, but my friend doesn’t like Stitch. I can believe it! I really like Stitch, so I will write about movie “Lilo and Stitch” form now.
I’m going to write about interesting story in this movie. Lilo is nurture for Stitch. She wants Stitch to be like an, Elvis Presley so Stitch dance Hawaiian dance, play the guitar, and make passes at woman. He was frustrating every thing. But Stitch is very brave. When Lilo was kidnap, he deprive for gas tank car, and he go to volcano. He plunged for volcano. He use blast and help her. He is like a superman. It scene is the most favorite scene. It is very interesting.
Second, I’m going to write about impression story in this movie. Lilo has no parents. Her parents were killed in accident, and she has no friends. She is always alone. She wants to make friends, and her sister decided to get a dog. So Nani and Lilo go to health center to get a dog, and Lilo chose Stitch. Stitch was ferocious, but he found a book in Lilo’s room. This book is “Ugly duckling.” He read this book seriously and he though “Where is my family?” and he asked for Dr. Jamba. Dr. Jamba said, “You have no family.” He shocked, but he looks for his family. At last, he found family. His family is Lilo and Nani. And he said, “This is my family. I found by myself.” They live in Lilo’s house with Dr. Jamba and Pleakly. They are looks happy.
My family is as good as Stitch’s family. I have for people in my family. I have parents, younger brother and me. My father is chatter. My mother and brother are like a comedian. I thought my family is very busy family. My family’s blood type is B, so we always quarrel. Yesterday, my mother and brother quarrel. Father and I is watched TV. My family’s character is easygoing. I though my family is nice.
I’m going to write about Stitch. He is my favorite character. He is cleverer than computer. He can do anything. He can play the guitar, surfing, and Hawaiian dance. And surprisingly, he can make Los Angels. He is amazing. He is unique character. I like him. My cousin likes too. My cousin watched three times this movie. His favorite scene is same my favorite scene.
I can’t image if my parents killed in accident. So I have to work to my brother. He is high school student, so he can’t work. I really can’t image. I want to be a Japanese teacher.
(455 words)
I’m going to write about interesting story in this movie. Lilo is nurture for Stitch. She wants Stitch to be like an, Elvis Presley so Stitch dance Hawaiian dance, play the guitar, and make passes at woman. He was frustrating every thing. But Stitch is very brave. When Lilo was kidnap, he deprive for gas tank car, and he go to volcano. He plunged for volcano. He use blast and help her. He is like a superman. It scene is the most favorite scene. It is very interesting.
Second, I’m going to write about impression story in this movie. Lilo has no parents. Her parents were killed in accident, and she has no friends. She is always alone. She wants to make friends, and her sister decided to get a dog. So Nani and Lilo go to health center to get a dog, and Lilo chose Stitch. Stitch was ferocious, but he found a book in Lilo’s room. This book is “Ugly duckling.” He read this book seriously and he though “Where is my family?” and he asked for Dr. Jamba. Dr. Jamba said, “You have no family.” He shocked, but he looks for his family. At last, he found family. His family is Lilo and Nani. And he said, “This is my family. I found by myself.” They live in Lilo’s house with Dr. Jamba and Pleakly. They are looks happy.
My family is as good as Stitch’s family. I have for people in my family. I have parents, younger brother and me. My father is chatter. My mother and brother are like a comedian. I thought my family is very busy family. My family’s blood type is B, so we always quarrel. Yesterday, my mother and brother quarrel. Father and I is watched TV. My family’s character is easygoing. I though my family is nice.
I’m going to write about Stitch. He is my favorite character. He is cleverer than computer. He can do anything. He can play the guitar, surfing, and Hawaiian dance. And surprisingly, he can make Los Angels. He is amazing. He is unique character. I like him. My cousin likes too. My cousin watched three times this movie. His favorite scene is same my favorite scene.
I can’t image if my parents killed in accident. So I have to work to my brother. He is high school student, so he can’t work. I really can’t image. I want to be a Japanese teacher.
(455 words)
2009年7月9日木曜日
Kapibara
Today is my friend’s birthday, so I presented it. It is Kapibara. She likes it very much. She glad to get it, and I’m happy. Oh, today I get present from my friend. She gives me lirakkuma!! It is strawberry series rilakkuma. I like this series very much, so I like it very much.
(54 words)
2009年7月8日水曜日
☆Birthday☆
Today is my birthday!! So I’m 20 years old now. My friends were send birthday mail. I felt very happy. At circle, seniors and friends was cracker, I’m very surprised and my mind blank. Ha. Ha. Ha. Do you know this character?? It is Rilakkuma. I like it very much, so my friend presented me. It is very cute. I like it.
I’m 20, so I can drink. Ha. Ha. I drank cocktail. It was good. Today is my birthday, and tomorrow is my friend’s birthday. I bought present, and I presented. I preparing send email to her.
(98 words)
Portfolio for Writing III
Three Billy-GoatsStudent ID: 08151
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1C
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
1-01b (2009.04.20) | letter to family | 2009.06.01 | 5 | 247 | 5 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
(1-01c) | Dear My Host Family |
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1-02a (2009.06.01) | University Life | 2009.04.08 | 4 | 416 | 3 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
1-02b (2009.07.06) | University Life | 2009.07.15 |
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1-03a (2009.06.29) | Aloha | 2009.06.29 | 6 | 455 | 2 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
1-03b (2009.07.13) | Aloooooooooooha☆ |
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Totals | --- | --- | 31 | 2358 | 10 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: I think I could write I want to introduce about my university all things. →University Life
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | letter to family" | 2009.04.08 | 36 words | Hi! Rie I have been to Australia... |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | University life | 2009.06.25 | 20 words | I like talk to friends and watching ... |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | University Life | 2009.06.01 | 59words | I sympathized the first sentence that... |
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Half Blood Prince | 2009.07.17 | 27 words | You seemed happy and excited to watch... |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009.07.18 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 16 words | I really enjoyed Harry Potter... |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | Kapibara | 2009.07.09 | 14 words | I guess your friend... |
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009.07.18 | --- | --- |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 22 words | My friend looked happy... |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
- Header, because I think it is stand out.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
I could read comments soon.
I could exchange with visitor.
3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 1-01 | Billy-Goats | 2009.04.18 | 75 | 0 |
BR 1-02 | ugly dackling | 2009.04.19 | 73 | 0 |
BR 1-03 | Ponocchio | 2009.04.29 | 106 | 1 |
BR 1-04 | Shoemaker and the Elves | 2009.05.01 | 178 | 0 |
BR 1-05 | Vampire Killer | 2009.05.04 | 192 | 0 |
BR 1-06 | Fairytale | 2009.05.06 | 270 | 0 |
BR 1-07 | The Clumsy | 2009.05.18 | 75 | 1 |
BR 1-08 | The Frog prince | 2009.05.25 | 129 | 0 |
BR 1-09 | Narnia | 2009.06.06 | 204 | 0 |
BR 1-10 | Dianna | 2009.06.15 | 111 | 0 |
BR 1-11 | Queen of France | 2009.06.26 | 146 | 0 |
BR 1-12 | Frog | 2009.07.06 | 148 | 0 |
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
BR 1-09: Narnia
I could write this review soon, because this is one of favorite movie. I enjoying write review.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | Ｏ | |
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | Ｏ | |
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | Ｘ | |
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | Ｏ | |
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | Ｘ | |
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | Ｘ | |
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4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | Ｏ | |
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | Ｘ | |
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | Ｘ | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
- I paste many picture.
- I used Pink and Blue.
- I wrote simple.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
I felt interesting. I’m going to write more at next semester.
Typing speed is faster. I didn’t like computer, but now I like using computer.
I always took a picture with my friend to paste blog, it was interesting
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
You had better take a many picture. For example your friends, favorite thing, food and so on.
Write a blog and read book when you have free time.
I think need typing skill, so you had better practice. And need basic computer knowledge and USB memory.
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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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2009年7月7日火曜日
Birthday Eve
Tomorrow is my birthday!!!! I'm looking forward to! I'm exciting now. Ha. Ha. Ha.
(14 words)
(14 words)
2009年7月6日月曜日
I found it!!!
I really happy, because at last!! I found my ipod. I feel really happy, so I listening to music every day. My favorite singers are Gwen Stefani, Black Eyed Peas, Miley Cyrus, ABBA, and Britney Spears. I really like them. I really like my ipod. It is cute isn’t it?? It color is pink!! I like pastel color. Especially, I like pink, sky blue, and purple. My room is very colorful, so I like my room. My room is the best place. I like reading favorite books, using computer, and watching favorite movies with cola and popcorn in my room.
(100 words)
BR 1-12: Frog and Toad
I read “Frog and Toad All Year.” This story is interesting. Frog is scatterbrain, and coward. Toad is massive and active. They are very nice friend. Frog likes winter and snow. Why they don’t hibernate?? Ha. Ha. Ha. This book has five stories. I like story of ice cream. When I read this chapter, I went to cafeteria to buy ice cream. Toad has two ice creams, but ice cream was melting. It dripped down jacket, pants, and his feet. He cried “I can’t see!!” He looks like monster. It is funny. Every animal escaped from Toad. At last, he fell into the pound. Toad said to Frog “I’m sorry.” And Frog said “Never mine.” Oh, I thought Frog is kind. If you want to read this book, you can read at library. I read Frog and Toad series. It is interesting and cute. Toad is very funny.
YL=1.2~1.6
(148 words)
2009年7月5日日曜日
Friday and Saturday
On Friday, I played with my friends. They were same junior high school and basketball club, so they are tall!! But I don’t tall (-. - ;) We went to Joyfull. I ate ice cream. We chatted four hours at Joyfull. On the way, one of the friends joined us. She was same school, basketball club and tennis club. We chatted again. After that we decided to go to round one at twelve o’clock!! Then, we went to round one. I never went there. There are very good place. We played tennis, basketball, bowling, batting, Karaoke, and game. It was very interesting. I want to go to there again. We played until three o’clock. I felt sleep.
Next day, I had volunteer, so I woke up seven o’clock. I felt so sleep. I could sleep only two hours. We decollated to the Star Festival, and we played bingo game. Children were excited, so we feel happy. After the volunteer, I went to MacDonald with my friends. We ate hamburger. I like hamburger very much. MacDonald’s hamburger is very delicious. And I went to CD shop and I bought “The E・N・D.” I like Black eyed peas. I like “Boom Boom Pow” and “I gotta feeling.” These music are make me spirit.
(214 words)
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